Editing User talk:Doc von Schmeltwick/archive 1

:::::I'd revise "''In other words, it was just a description that the writer made for both insect types that a wiki editor morphed into a name. In the smaller text of the Nintendo Player's guide, it is mentioned as an "annoying swarm of lethal moths", so the "insect minions" in the main description most likely assorts the moths and unidentified bugs together.''" to "''In smaller text directly below, an "annoying swarm of lethals moths" is also mentioned, but the "insect minions" in the main description most likely assorts the moths and unidentified bugs together since it only mentions the insect and rock obstacles. In other words, the "insect minions" was just a description that the guide writer made for both insect types that a wiki editor morphed into a name for one of them.''" I think it's a bit more clarifying this way. Maybe I'd also move the part about ''Majora's Mask 3D'' Prima guide afterwards so that whole chunk stays on the topic of guide quotes. Other than that, looks good. Perhaps it can be accompanied by a snipped scan of the guides showing the appropriate text. [[User:LTL|LTL]] ([[User talk:LTL|talk]]) 18:50, 24 December 2019 (UTC)